It's very good. Kind of disjointed, though, and you never really say what happened (which could be intentional, but it's not clear either way).

Wow........thts is really sad..i lik it.. a 5/5 for me!!

I thought the rhymes were ok. 'crappy' haha, I actually laughed at that line.
The poem was good, just seemed childish. I guess because of the language and vocabulary. OH well keep trying!