This is good....and i loved how u ended it...you can really see how you feel for him...good job....5/5

VER VERY NICE WORK!!! Seriously! Ur describing it with true love....Keep up the good work! ;)

Cool, i liked it 4/5

WOW

I loved it!

5/5 and i dont give that out too offten

Keep writing!

THiS iS REALLY AMAZiNG! GREAT STORY AND AMAZiNG RHYMiNG! KEEP iT UP!

x3------SHELBY