You looked into my eyes and said you'LLkill for me
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Your -you'll- the ll's are capital and there isn't a space between that and kill. I liked this one, i'm sure a lot of people can relate to it, i know i can. good job.

This is the reason i hate my own kind guys just suck, great piece though luvin the flow-
raindrops 5/5

I really liked this one...cause its so very true, how a lot of girls go through this, just because the guy only wants to have fun!!! Great poem...another one to my favorites!