Good job! Sounds like you went through a tough time. Hope it gets better. Keep up the good work with your poems.

Its really original, good use of rhyme, its subtle and I like how the sentence length varies. Good job.

THAT`S REALLY GOOD;; iT`S SAD! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

x3-------SHELBY

Thanks for the comment and excellent poem! my parents are like that too *bleh*

Thx for your vote/comment watever you left....., i think yours is really good yay for you!!! ~bambi~

Well, at least you let out your feelings in this.. The flow wasn't very good as some of your lines were too long.. Also, some of the words you used clashed with others and made it difficult to read.. I feel that you could have made this deeper.. It is just stating the facts.. Why don't you add some emotion in? Nice job though 4/5