A truly superb poem (Again)
I love your work

The last stanza is my favourite

John

5/5

Good rythem.
im speachless... lol

I truly do love the pictures you paint with your words. It really puts you right there! So beautiful! 5/5 for sure!
~Midnight Sun
p.s. I just realized you might not realize I used to be Jules and that's what I was under when I used to comment on yours. Just thought I'd let yah know! = )

What a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading this. Excellent job! Take care Cindy

I think this poem needs to end with a question mark. The message is solid, but the whole thing is a question.