Woh, you really miss them...

Thats good. i know that feeling im goin through that right now and it sucks. ty for commenting.

I've read a couple of your poems hopfully you take this advise not as critisism but a helpful tool: I noticed that your sentenses don't quite flow beause the sylabals to the matching line don't match. you should get them closer to eachother at least. But I like the feeling in your poems and you have a knack for imagery I can practicly see all your pain like it was my own. a very rare talent that might get you some recognition in hearts like it did mine...

Beautifully written and wonderful flow of emotion. Although there really wasn't an exact format, it flowed nicely.
4/5
[tragic]

I know exactly how this feels.I sort of feel it everyday. and no matter what I always find myself wanting it back and wondering why she had to lie. but =/ oh well. I really liked this one too. good stuff =)

Beautiful ... simple .. & sweet :) 4/5