by Simon Hayes
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Great stuff Sarah... Another piece that is written so beautifully. I very much enjoyed this poem. The title is brilliant and the use of wording is just impeccable. |
by Lovely Bones
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This reminds me of the scene in the movie "Pride and Prejudice". How wonderful! You described it perfectly, even if that's not what you were describing lol. Keep it up! |
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The first stanza I thought was god though starting a sentence and trailing the res ton another line kind of throws it off a bit. The second stanza felt a bit weak, though beautiful in a way. |
by Misstress
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Simplicity and Purity, I like how you used that words... |
by X2892
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Very good poem u have 5/5 |