I loved this honey. this was amazing. I wish I could write like you =( grr. i love your useage of vocabulary. one day you have to teach me these big words. lol

but other then that this was amazing. just like all the other ones you have written. i love you sweetie

Love the words you used in this. you've been using a lot of big words lately =] i like it. amazing job on this. the flow was great! the poem was really sad. and i love sad poems. great job. 5/5

Awesome write! Kepp it up!

Wow!! Man i love the words you use in these poems! Brilliant! Nice rhyme sceme, and i love the flow of it! So much emotian in these words. Its just... WOW! Keep writing!

Wow. I shouldn't even start on how this one was awesome. I just think this poem was meant to be read aloud to an audience...

5/5