Comments : Your Eyes

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    You paint a beautiful picture, well done. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow that was absolutely beautiful.. I love the descriptions and colorful use of imagery and diction. Amazing piece.. keep it up!

    God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    An amazing poem, another great job by you. this poem is so great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, that was sweeet! I found it a little confusing but maybe that was just me.. The flow was good and I liked the form you chose! Nicely done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful rictameter, lovely, just lovely!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Excellent write! It is such a unique masterpiece, and your few words held so much beauty, that I read it over and over again.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Another wonderful poem. Short and sweet yet again. You got your point across with little words, and it was amazing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Misstress... you've done! amazing... not too long and not boring to read actaully i keep on reading thanks..5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wonderful. I've never read a rictameter before, and i don't know the structure of it, but i like it. =] You used excellent descriptions and your words just all fit in perfectly, all in such a short poem yet again. Great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    I am so jelous right now. You never
    cease to amaze me. This is an excellent poem. There really isn't
    nothing more that I can say to you
    that I haven't already said. 5/5

    Love
    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I loved your choice in words very sweet
    thanks for rrc on my poem

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    Another great poem u made, 5/5 again

  • 17 years ago

    by Leslie

    Nope, this is my new favorite of yours. i love it, its so quick and so prfect that you want to go back and read it through again and again. awesome job.