I think it is obvious what this thought provoking poem is saying, and it could send a strong message.. Great work

Very nice short poem...it was meaningful and had a nice ending...but that last line that was seperate from all of it didn't really fit in.
Good flow..5/5

Great work once again, you have done an amazing job

This poem reminds me of peer pressure and how it affects teens these days. It seems like you are standing above that. You go! More power to you!
*CiaO*

Very Interesting work, thought provoking..

Keep on writing on what you feel and like..

God Bless!

Great poem for pressure stuff. I thought it was really thought out, even though it was short. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I liked the depth of this one. Nice work.

I lik this one..keep on writing! 5/5

This is another great poem!
short and straight to the point i loved it!