Another beautiful poem you penned here, "those around us will certainly see, the qualities of love and compassion, as gentleness and kindness cover us with glee." well done myfriend, mybest wishes for you....take care!
A bit confusing..But that is why I loved it. This is like a perfect poem... Simple yet complicated. I am not sure what else to say...Wonderful job.. Just wonderful.
I, however, did not like your rhyme scheme...
Wow. This was absolutely beautifully written. I loved it! I thought it was really original that you thought of writing a poem on his outstretched hands. It just seemed to catch my eye. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo
I really like this poem. You had some very nice descriptive words in it and it flowed very well. The first stanza was my favorite. It sets the tone well and makes you want to read the rest of it. Great job on this. 5/5