Comments : On Poems and Alms

  • 11 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Fabulous kabs... i like it flowed well. just continue writing i know u can write more god bless yah!5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Another beautiful poem you penned here, "those around us will certainly see, the qualities of love and compassion, as gentleness and kindness cover us with glee." well done myfriend, mybest wishes for you....take care!

    bert ~

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really liked this. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    My goodness, we have a true poet in our midst! That was deep Misstress and the message is something I will be pondering about. Great write!

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wow this poem was..amazing. I loved your wording and detail to it. It was great. I am in awhe. I just want to re-read it over and over again.

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Well, i've nothing to say, but thank you very much misstress, i vey appreciated your nice comment....

    "If Love is like Roses, then what about its thorns?"

    the thorns is like life, without it the roses would be nothing....! and the same meaning; "A lonely soul without the touch of love, Is an empty soul without hope of life."

    oh my..i still remember this song..."the roses have a thornes"

  • 11 years ago

    by Esther

    This is true, i do feel sorry for them, i wish every-one would just re-cycle so never again will a tree have to suffer for our ways!

  • 11 years ago

    by Aussie

    COOL, see the view from the pen. it flows well. i like ur taste:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem by a great poet, keep up the best job like always.....
    a 5/5 from me.....

  • 11 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short, yet very powerful job. The words flowed and had a delicate touch to it. Great job

  • 11 years ago

    by Darien

    This was a really good poem, but I was reading the 2nd line and I was thinking..

    [Understood] instead of understand, if you were going with past tense. I think it sounds the same, but to be grammatically correct. Good stuff though.

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    A bit confusing..But that is why I loved it. This is like a perfect poem... Simple yet complicated. I am not sure what else to say...Wonderful job.. Just wonderful.
    I, however, did not like your rhyme scheme...

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Wow. This was absolutely beautifully written. I loved it! I thought it was really original that you thought of writing a poem on his outstretched hands. It just seemed to catch my eye. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really like this poem. You had some very nice descriptive words in it and it flowed very well. The first stanza was my favorite. It sets the tone well and makes you want to read the rest of it. Great job on this. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Another touching peace of work!