Ahhh, lan this was lovely penned you potray here, and this was great ended, Hoping by chance
By destiny perhaps...

but i don't understand why they rate them like this...anyway, i hope you have a great day, take care....best wishes.

Woo! i love the lines

"Got all the rhythm and rhymes
In verses and arrays
Of hard to find words.

Only to find out that it would
C o l l a p s e
At the slightest sound of your name"

dang. that's cool

5/5. GREAT POEM! I loved it loved it loved it!!

Wow this is wonderful. very lovely but kind of sad poem. you did a great job writing it. you are a great writter 5/5

This is a very sweet poem. The words show that you put a very lot of emotion into it. I love the flow and also I can relate to this magnificent write myself. I love the third stanza:

Only to find out that it would
C o l l a p s e
At the slightest sound of your name
Tickling my ear, my heart.

The words alone speak for themselves.

Keep up the excellent work.

Letty

Very creative and unique. I liked it.
"Got all the rhythm and rhymes
In verses and arrays
Of hard to find words."
My favorite part it was written very nicely. Along with the entire poem.

Wow,
every enjoyable poem as i can relate to, very nice job done....
another 5/5 from me.

Woah, i like this alot. It's different and unique and that's what i like abou tit most. Every word fitted in perfectly, with a flawless finish. Supurb. =] I love reading your poems, you have such talent. Keep up the great work. 5/5

Whoa this is a nice poem!
you penned it really well!
i donno what to say!

This was quite sweet but again I found it hard to understand.. The descriptions were good but the grammer threw me off.. The flow was good too.. Nice job 4/5

Wow...nicely written! it make me think for the last line very nice.. another great job of you again kabs=) pagpatuloy mo lng yan i know u can be more good writer soon. well thanks for sharing those great poets of you i really like it.. again 5/5 4u!

takecare

Aww you word your poems really nicely

OMG, what a beautiful write! I can't even begin to explain how much this poem relates to me, it's like something I've been trying to pen my whole life, but I obviously was never successful. This is beautiful. A spectacular masterpiece, and one of my most favorite reads of a long time. What else can I say, this well deserved a spot in the weekly contest. Take care and keep writing, and I wish you forever good luck. God bless. 5/5

So great and touced what you came with ..
yours
hazem

Love the poem comment bac

Personally: i didn't understand it that well--- But it did sound well written and it flowed well. Congrats on winning the contest too!

xxEvilAngelxx

Wow. You have just described how I feel right now. Can't sleep because all I do is think about one person and one person only. It's so great being in love. You painted a very nice picture within your poem aswell. I loved it; 5/5.
Much love, Emma xox
P.S. Keep up the brilliant work =) x

It is such an honor to be posted here.
Many thanks to the Judges and
To those who voted.
Honestly I have no idea how and why
this simple piece of mine is one of the winners.
So Thank you all
very much appreciated.

God Bless!

I LOVE THIS POEM!

A good poem like the my poems i hope u read mine 10/10