Very good. Love the imagery. Flowed well and good content.

Good job.

Peace and happiness
Jeannie

This is so sweet. I love the imagination when it allows me to visualize what is written.

--Sher

Marvellous penned, simply write but, something beautiful inside...well done!

best wishes, bert ~

Awe, I liked how there was a hidden meaning in this piece. It was wonderfully written. Keep it up! 5/5 =]]

-Jenna.

5/5. Didnt know what it exactly was about but really liked it!.

Wow, short but very precise, delicate poem.

Hm. Well, I am not really sure what to say about this.. I did like the metaphorical aspects of the poem such as a woman being a butterfly and you and her creating a baby.. Yet I didnt understand why you then changed it to an angel.. It was still very beautiful but a little confusing.. Also, I did not like the lines you had between the "heart beating" lines.. It really ruined the effect.. Try and fix those up. Other than that, very cute, nicely done! 5/5

Wow i really like this poem a lot.
although some of it was a littlie confusing.
but other then that you did a great job writing it.
keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

Another great poem by you,
very enjoyable

The words are beautiful, and so is the concept. But it's a bit rocky. I loved it though once I read it over and was able to interpret the meaning. You have written a lovely poem. ( as usual lol) Keep up the wonderful work 5/5

Love
Letty

This is simply beautiful and so very poetic-I don't know what else to say!It is very deep.The last stanza is perfect.

Gary Jurechka

Awe thats adorible.. .lol :D i liked it

Aww so short and sweet 5/5

Good poem i give u a 5/5