This is really deep. It makes me ponder and that's a good thing. Those are question that might not ever get answered. I enjoyed reading this poem. You have amazed me once again. 5/5

Love
Letty

I love it! It's very deep and powerful, and again had me leaving this page thinking about what you wrote. Another amazing write. Keep it up. =] 5/5

Tammie

Beautiful penned, writing with beautiful emotions, simply yet great message....

Mistress,

Title... not relative. IT is not at all untitled gibberish. Name it something to do like "Thoughts of wisdom" .
or "Questionning the wise?"

Use punctuation, especailly at the end of lines. Do not assume the reader sees a pause at the end of each line, guide him whetehr he shouls see a pause or a semicolon or a fullstop.

Concept -- very nice. Vision -- not bad.

The line "True wisdom we seek, shall be found?" is not phrased well. "Will be found?" is better. You cannot end a shall with a question mark unless the addressed object is the first person. e.g: shall i come? shall you come? is wrong english.

Simple vocabulary and good flow. Lancet - nice word to use and if the meaning of the word is known it adds so much value to the reader for that particular line, especailly to broken hearts.

Finally, considering the whold of the poem, I do nto see much relation between Wisdom and Truth and destiny. Truth and destiny are well related ideas and are considered to be above materialistic world. Wisdom is more of a human oriented concept. Perhaps Knowledge relates well to Truth, but then Wisdom?

Amazing Poem. Thanks for the comment on my poem. Keep it up! Luv Nicole =)

Wowww... This is so good!!! *5/5* effort for sure, one of my best reads too...
Karms :)

Wow, another great poem by you, this is so great, i give it a 5/5

Hmmmm...this poem definately makes you think---I love it! The format of the whole thing is great-I love when there are questions in poems; they really add a lot. Amazing work, I really enjoyed reading it! My only suggestion is to change the title; it kind of seems irrelevant to the poem, but maybe it's just me. Anyway, 5/5 Great write!

Very well written
5/5

taylor

That was really deep,makes me think =]
way to go!
--lexie

It's deep, and meanigful. It flowed very well together. Keep on writing.

Labyrinth sounds... like it, I like it a lot.

This poem deserves a fitting title, don't you think? It is far from gibberish and give the reader plenty to think about. There is more to this poem than you give yourself credit for (unless it was intentional, of course).

Bret

Also:
Without truth there is no wisdom, without wisdom there is no concept of destiny.

Wow, amazing poem, simple yet beautiful and deep-tara