A very strong lesson to be learned
Your style of writing is one of my faves so i really enoyed reading this even though it was etched with a tinge of sadness and loss.
Excellent write!
5/5
*Gem*

WOW, great poem, really made me think about life and love! great writing techniques and message, keep up the excellent work. xoxo

WOW..This poem is amazing..It brought tears to my eyes,,I'm glad it's not true but it does have a lesson behind it to be learned..you should always tell someone how you feel and not keep it to yourself...great job 5/5..
Crystal
ps thanks for the comment on my poem..

Well I read a couple of your poems and I have to critique because theirs always something to learn, I wish people would give me some pointers... I noticed that you don't rhyme in all of your lines only some. well the way peoples minds work is if they hear it rhymeing they expect to hear it in the next couple of lines and when you don't it's kind of a let down. (true phycology) and some of your lines are longer than the others which throws off your rhythm, but you keep the structure pretty good intact. Don't think I'm knocking you because your talent is rare and something actully worth seeing in life. I love your story telling abilities...but you should try to keep it shorter and still have the same feeling because that's where the real skill comes in. I'm glad I had the privilage to read such a special poem it ment alot to me and I'm sure your abilites touched many hearts...

But now I've learned my lesson,
and i promise this to you,
i will never go a day,
without telling someone "i love you.""

oh absolutly loved the last stanza. brilliant! the poem was overall very good. some lines didnt rhyme but that could be fixed but i loved it overall

This is so sad, yet beautiful, it made me realize how strong love can be for someone..thanks for commenting on my poam because it had the same idea to this one...and someone will take their life away for someone else..or because of someone else, andi, BRAVO!!^_^