This is very loving and i have mad respect for you choice! i wish i had that strength!!

Good poem. Sad and sweet at the same time. I loved your word usage and it had a nice flow. Keep it up && take care!

So bittersweet.
I can totally relate =(
The ryhming was as good as always
5/5
*Gem*

I really liked your poem,, beautifully written.. it's written straight from your heart, i loved your choice of words...
thanx for your comment.. i really appreciate it!
keep up the great work.. i'll go check out some more of your poems cause you seem to me like a very telented poet..
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]

So deep, and so beautiful! YOUR rhyme scheme is awesome. reminds me a lot of mine. You def. have talent. Dont ever give that up either, some day..you'll be huge. Great writing . keep up the good work!

This is a really awesome poem. Thank you so much for the comment on mine. you write great poetry and you should keep on writing. awesome.

Andrea

Aww this was awesome .
I love it . It`s deep and it`s beautiful .
Yur rhyming is fantastic .
This is my fave poem . Love it .
..ღ__MiNDYY

AWW;; i CAN T0TALLY RELATE T0 THiS RiGHT N0W! KEEP iT UP!

MAKE-ME-CRY*

I can totally relate to this poem. After a time you cannot cope with a certain situation cause it doesn' make sence.
you have done a wonderful job. I rate you 5/5 keep up writing

Wow. This is very sad. I relate, though, too. Alot. Hmm.

Hey Andi.
Thank you so much for your comment on my poem "Memories". Means a lot!
I love this poem, very honest and true, two words that mkean the same, haha.
Well hpe you have a lovely day and keep up witht he wonderful poetry!
Love
Jane
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I liked it alot!! it flows really well except for this one part
"she knew she had to leave,
but it hurt to say goodbye,
she couldn't show her breaking heart,
or this would kill her for sure."

kinda messes the flow but otherwise i lvoe it!! i gave it a 5..hope you return the favor

Beautiful poem
You are very talented.