Comments : A Demon's Halo

  • 11 years ago

    by Jax x lyn

    Beautiful and so catchy, especially with the title. That's what drew me to it... *pauses to think*

    Anyway, FYI I've only read a few of your poems, but I'm adding you to my favourites because you're one truly FANTASTIC, and way-talened writer. Keep it up!
    [*:.heart.broken.~] xoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Shouldn't that be in the dark category? anyhow, it's cool..

  • 11 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Whoa, that gave me goose bumps!

    That's ONE OF THE BEST poems i've heard!

  • 11 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. I loved the end stanza. It showed alot of emotion!

    Oxy Cotton is a pain killer doctors prescribe(sp?) to people. If you take to many at one time you can get addicted. It's very hard to get off once you get addicted.

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is greatly written poem, that showes true talent. nice job...
    keep up the great job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Ooh! aren't you so talented! hey, great poem, it flows really well and it's so unique!!
    ^and to ~â‚£ading |nspiration~,
    this poem doesn't have to be in the dark category, because, this is life!!! there are so many people like the one in the poem...

    anyways... good job!
    5/5!!!

    Forever*Yours

  • 11 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Good work, you portrayed the opposite side very well. 4/5!

    ~jas~

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I absolutely loved this!
    I thought the wording and imagery were fantastic, and I enjoyed the ending muchly, I thought it had great impact.
    Wonderful work.

  • 11 years ago

    by shawn

    I really like you poetry, i am going to add you to my favorites. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Amazing poem.. very unique.. and great title.. great rhyme and flawless flow.. no suggestions at all.. truely spectacular write!

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a well written piece. The message is very strong. Excellent job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Deana

    Your rhymes are great ,easy flow enjoyed the content great job,thank you for commenting mine ,would love to see if you like some of my others thanks again.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaila

    Woah nice wording I liked the flow to and especially the last stanza nice job

  • 11 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    I loved the wording and it flowed perfectly. keep it up bub

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

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  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Greatly worded, the flow was also magnificent, i really like how you can just write and it all fits together, it seems to me in this poem its like someone on death row( i only say that b cuz i just got done watching the green mile)

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Greatly worded, the flow was also magnificent, i really like how you can just write and it all fits together, it seems to me in this poem its like someone on death row( i only say that b cuz i just got done watching the green mile)

  • 10 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    This is a great poem, I like the imagery and word choice! Topic rings completely true to a lot of people in today's world. Excellent work, I enjoyed reading this piece!

  • This poems really has a great expression of emotion. the flow could have been better but overall 5/5. great work.

  • 9 years ago

    by Spirit

    A Demon's Halo

    The last line lost me. Sorry if this is blunt but I belive it's true. Ypur words had me and your imperfect rhyme scheme worked, but when I got to that last line I lost the grasp and the poem just fell apart. You could fix this by making the last line in your poem stronger, this would fix your problem.

    Great read anyway.