You're breaking my heart. i hope you guys find a way to all be happy together; your poem is one of your best yet. keep writting and typing and
writting and typing and writting and typing and well you get the picture
"There once was two girls
who were the best of friends in the world...
they laughed they played
they shared everything they made.."
I know how this feels, I was like this with my best friend.
"the day she found him
everything was different to me..."
I can relate to this again, when my best friend found her boyfriend she had no time for me. She basically blocked me out of her life.
"i miss her so much...
picks him over her friends
she does not comprehend...
if it were me first i wouldn't of done what she does "
Your so honest in your poetry, which is a good thing. It makes it a lot easier for many people to relate and read.
"cant wait till the day she comes back home...
friendships never end
thats why we call it best friends.."
I like your ending, it shows that she still is your best friend dispite the fact that she chose her boyfriend over you many times.
Just know that you can still see her, and still be with her you just have to try. My best friend moved to a different country to be with her boyfriend we hardly ever talk now :( Good poem. I can really relate to this. 5/5
Jess this will always be my favorite poem
EVER maybe because its so fill with so many
emotioms or cause its personal or whatever
but anyway its my fAV. I miss you guys
together. it just feels so diffent and diffent in a sad way. Oh well life goes on and people
come and go but it stills sucks.
I love sweet jess and I miss you and the way life use to be but I told once befor you
can have everything you want in this life except the way it use to be