This was an amazing write. It was short, but held so much meaning and the description in this was wonderful. You had some great word usage. Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

I like the ending of it. actually i really like the whole thing. its short and gets right to the point and is pretty straightforward about it.

5/5. Very good. I felt the pain and sympathy of not wanting to live. Very good. And thank you for commenting my poem~

Hey anotha really kool poem, u r really talented keep it up

This is pretty dark. Are you a little sad? Haha, no just kidding. This one is the better of your two new ones, me thinks. The flow is okay. 4/5

Wow...even though it was so short, it really got to me.
I enjoyed the imagery and flow.
I thought it was very well written.

Good, i felt the emotion and the pain... maybe convey the emotions a little bit more, describe things more, put the reader there in your shoes and paint them the atmosphere. nice job

Wow, i really like this poem.........5/5

Very nice poem! I don't really know what to say to these poems only because I am not used to reading this kind of poetry!

Wow. That poem may have been short, but it had a lot of meaning to it. It is very dark but you did an excellent job on it. Keep it up.

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Hey, Sorry I took so long. Good poem, short, but very descriptive. keep it up

Hey Thankx for the commments, i like this alot cause it was short be there was alot of meaning in it..

Peace
Mahamed

Its like watching a medical program reading this poem, its well written and if it was on any other subject Id applaud..... at the moment I; m rubbing my wrists and feeling squeamish lol

Short and to the point, I commend you on that; I can never seem to write in such a succinct manor as this. Great piece, powerfully written with a lot of content within very few lines

5/5

I really like the emotion created in this. The descriptions were very vivid, which is always good. It was short, but excellently written.

Its a little short ......but rele well written .....keep it up ..

Short and to the point but death is never the answer nice poem 5/5

It has no rythm no ryhme yet i like it! please don't change one bit! coz it will only ruin it!

I like how it really explaings your feelings.

After reading the other poem, i expected more or less of the same. I knew this poem would be sad by the title, but i never guessed i'd have been overwhelmed by the powerfulness and words. well done
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