I liked this one.

Great poem!
You really have lots of talent! :)

Good job! 5/5

Keep it up and Take care! :)

I like the closing. it was something to leave me wondering. i think with this poem if you can transfer it into a rhyming one it would be fantabulous!

but i like it the way it is too.

This is good
very well written
keep it up
oxo