Well emotions penned you potray here, beautiful sad..... wrenches out too many words in the waves... aloneness means shades and evenings. morning and noon are never mistresses to solitary souls. separate and different, like light & darkness.... anyway, whatever it may come, keep your head up high, take care.
You described a situation that I know of very well from some of my friends experiences and I know how bad it hurts, one of the worst feelings to feel..i think some of your rhymes were a little weak, but none the less it was a good poem written with a lot of a emotion into it!
Awww well done this is amazing, and i no its hard to lose someone you love to someone else but i think you've done the right thing because he is happy!
but maybe you could of told him how you felt before he asked the new girl out, things might be different now.
love u xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Hey grulie! =D loved the poem but..you never know mavy he liked you too but wasnt shure of what you tought .thats really nice of you to let them be but i think you should of spoke your feelings to him who knows mavy you would off been with him now instead of her.. take care grul. i gave your poem a "5" keep your ead up. theres plenty guys to go around =D
Wow probably 1 of the best poems i've read so far. i give that 5/5!! it kinda relates to me cuz theres this friend of mine i like but im too afraid to tell him...and he likes this other girl..but he doesnt get it...great poem though!
wicked poem it put shivers thorugh me once again.. i mean it kills dont it when u like someone close to you like your best mate and u know you both get on etc.. n you care so much for each toehr but when u see that person with someone else and you then help pick up pieces then they catch someone elses eyes... your bk to square one agai nand gotta let them go!... it sucks i know.. well tht is how my best lad mate feels bout me... erm but like isay i wood rather have them for longer if that means as a mate than a short time as a partner!
things happen for reasons so you will be ok i promise and you write lovely btw!! keep your chin up sweet... he kinda asked for your blessing.. he does love you but just maybe not in the way you want him too!