Omg love the poem anyways
write a comment bac to me thanxx

This is my favorite of all your poems
it is like OH MY GOD good!!!!
5/5
you could really go somewhere with this poem. like in a book. ive always hoped to have my own book of poetry out but you have so much more potentical then i do.
-kissy face elisa

Wow, this was a great great poem. ur a great writter. this poem relates to me alot so it touched my heart. keep up the good work. 120/100 i must say. :-)

I like this one i hope i find my other heart and we will just have one heart beat.

Wow nice poems
keep it up
love it and thanx so much 4 the comment thank u alot and
may god bless u
so bye ttul

This was a great poem. You're such a talented poet. You give me so much inspiration with your poems.

Awwwh, I thought this was really sweet, I loved the last stanza, it made me smile.
I liked the imagery used in this, it was very powerful.

Man.. this is the sort of stuff I would be writing a week ago. *sigh* Dude, I hate you! LMAO .. no, I envy you.. and your writing skills. Lol.. take care man.. never stop writing!

I loved this poem. This is how true love should be. Loved the title and everything about it.! Ecellent job! Take care Cindy

Wow that was so so greatt!! you are an amazingg poet, and it has the perfect titlee... great job, and i will definitly read moree... 5/5 from mee, and keep writing poems like thiss and i will definitly keep readingg

xoSara

Good poem

I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
<3

Wow... amazing.... happy love poem... its good.. 5/5