Comments : The battle inside

  • 11 years ago

    by DarkJem

    It's good i like the way u use the rythming couplets, your favorite word seems to be pawn mines shell when i write poetry :)

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    You need to edit this one and fix up the spelling. the ' are making the poem have lots of //// in it. makes it hard to read.

    but still found this one kinda funny. and that for me is a good thing. i am not easily amused. lol.

    5.

    david