Unusual poem but it really works!! good job x

Ha Ha that was really strange and I really agreed with it. It was a bit short and I think there could have been more sortof.. well anyways keep writing =]
Pip xxx

True - if you can, you should, and I can see you have.
Short but to the point, it wasn't a bad poem, but not the best I've read either, sorry if that sounds blunt/harsh. I just honestly found the rhymes to be cheesy/forced.