I love the rhythmn and rhyme of this passion of astronomical proportion

Oh Wow this has moved me to tears. You have managed to describe alot of us women who have been jilted and built up that wall to protect ourselves. Excellent. Dixie

This was an amazing write!

She sat upon the tip, of the moon, she knew so well
Casting shadows in the light, as the darkness fell.

loved this!
Charisma*

It is understandable to see why this is one of the top poems. Absolutely great job, the rhythm and flow was flawless and each line allowed the reader to be slowly dipped into the full of the words. Mind-Blowing poem.

Wow your poem was so good keep it up!!!!