Wow another good one 5/5 keep it up by the way i live really close to ilinois i live in indiana just checked out ur profile im sorry about ur dad i was in the same situation once...

This was beautiful!!
The imagery and wording were breathtaking, and it flowed very well.
You did a great job on this.

Is this about internet love or something? if so i can relate to it.
it's a very short poem, but it has emotion in it which makes it great! 5/5

~Kristina