I love this poem...I can totally relate. You really bring out the point of our life as younger years. I really love this poem. I am going to put in my locker at school as a daily reminder to me to keep my head up high. Love the poem as you can tell keep writing.

You are wise beyond your years my young friend. enjoy it while you can ,time flys!

So much emotion in each word beautifuly put together i enjoyed it 5/5

laura

OH MY GOSH! i love it.. it's so good! if i could i would give you more than a 5/5. it's just so true and absolutely amazing! =]] GREAT WORK!

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This is a very unique style that worked very well. I enjoyed the content as well. reminds me of my younger years

Nice