Comments : Family Photo

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelso

    This is a really good poem although its short 5/5 keep up the good work!
    ((Kelsey))

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wow,that was so good yet heart breaking..thanks for your comment on my poem...keep up the good work
    auna

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very nice. This tells alot of everyday life and experiance, and experiancing the anguish of a family change.
    Keep up the great work.
    God Bless 5/5

    ~*Tay*~

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I really liked this poem it was really good. In a short poem you got your meaning across and I like that. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I really liked this poem. The emotian included in it was amazing. It was short but told a whole story. An excellent read! Keep up the great work, and thanks for your comment. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The emotion in the poem was electric! gee. whoa! i so loved it.

    5/5 and great work. david

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Nice poem I enjoyed it unique

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Oh wow.
    this was amazing.
    the imagery & the wording! i felt as though the picture of the family was getting older in my mind as you described it.
    great write!
    5/5