We've come this far despite everything
I love you Marcus and that will never change
The fights, the words, they all just prove...
Nothing can break the vows we exchanged

I loved this last stanza. thought it was great and so full of hope. I really enjoyed the poem. Brought a smile to my face. Great...as always.

Kelly
xx

Gem As always your poem is wonderful! You post faster than I can keep up....lol..You can still feel the love coming through in this one. Great Job!

Good job Gem. I guess the only line I didn't like was the last one in the first stanza. It sounded out of place, and well, kinda corny. Sorry....But the rest was well done. Not as dark as I thought...so that was good! lol
Charisma*

Wonderful yet again. you are so talented. i love reading what you have to say. you come from the heart, and even your fiction just seems so real. you are lucky to have such a wonderful gift.

amazing yet again girl.

Erin :)

I love this! But I think the poem was dark but the 2 last stanzas sound more like a love poem than a dark poem! Great poem either way though!
xoxo

Sometimes we do say stupid things in the heat of the moment, whats makes it love is when we are able to realise the error of our way and still be together, its a rocky path but its worth every second ;) loved the poem :)))

Hey hun a powerful and deep poem. very well written uve expressed urself great!! keep it up. xx

Well not many people has patience like he has...trust me, i m going thro the same trouble....so i must confess...i could relate to every single word..the only thing is that...with me the ending is not good at all.

all the best and take care

Very well done. The flow was perfect and the message profound.

Great job
Jeannie

That was excellent. I have been searching for poems that resemble my relationship with my girlfriend. This is one that does. Although I wish it did not. Anyways nice work and keep it up.

This is a very good poem gemma, a 5/5!!!

I'm first to admit, I can be cruel with my tongue
What I say can knock your heart askew
I take my pain and rage out on someone I love
It's true; I hurt myself by hurting you

^^^^
Isn't that so true Gemma, after a fight when we sit down and truly think about it we come to realize we have not only hurt the one we love but we have hurt ourselves also. That deep lump in our throat that wells up after we've said those cruel words we never meant, and it grows bigger because we know it is to late to take them back.

I guess in a way I just still can't believe
That you would love someone as messed up as me
You know about my past and everything that went on
Yet you picked me up and brushed off the debris
^^^
Sounds to me though that you and Markus have many years of happiness before you.
Merry Christmas to you both!

Don't forget to carry around that little secret stash of misletoe in your pocket Gem.....lol

Take care deary!

Brilliant poem!!
Explains exactly how you and many others feel in relationships, everyone says things they regret in the heat of the moment, its nice to know you make up afterwards =D
5/5

Thanks for the vote and comment xx

Hey i love that its just saying something more then the words that stand there its a thing to think about really it is

Oh Kitten..
No matter what fights we have, i love you for you and i'm never leaving you no matter what we say in the heat of the fight...
I love you more than life
Marcus

I was a bit scared about posting this poem actually cos i didn't want people to see this side of me..
So thankyou everyone for not judging me too harshly..
*Gem*

Wow! dat waz relii gd, i can soo relate!

This poem captures how I feel when I am coming out of most realtionships..Very Good!!!

I wanted to say thanks for voting for my poem. Of all the people on here you are one of my favorite poets. This is a really good poem. I hope to be as good as you some day!

It since like a letter than a poem
but 5/5 any one i loved it