Comments : Forbidden love

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    A good poem,, think that on some places the rhyming is a little forced but I still like it.

    the part that I like the most is:

    it's killing me too,
    i really wanna be with you.
    but i guess i have to say goodbye,
    i'll try hard not to cry.

  • 17 years ago

    by erin

    Omfg GREAT poem in a way i can relate... tnx aloooot for the comment....

    xoxo, eron

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    If this really did happen to you than this is sad and dont worry you will see him one day nice poem.=)