Comments : Elixir

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a wonderful poem. Nature is wonderful isn't it. This is really a greay poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by robin milford

    Neat poem very different. thanks for your comment on "Destruction"

  • 10 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    I ask the Mockingbird
    In the midst of his aria:
    "Oh restless Romeo in search of a mate
    Have you a bit of sympathy
    For we clamorous, earthbound humans?"

    WoW. Great work on this. You did an exceptional job. Bravo. Loved the beginning stanza.

    Excellent
    Jeannie

  • 10 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is so pretty, remarkable imagery! I am so intrigued by your poetry, it really inspires me...

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very unique poem, with interesting subject. I like the choice of words and its flow.
    "I drink in this overflowing
    Elixir

    Infinite wisdom
    Sung by my feathery
    Fellow companion "
    ^ These are my favorite lines, truly beautifully written.
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Benjamin AmbersCry

    Very Vivid;I liked it.Keep it up

  • 8 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    What an exquisite write dear. I am dumbfounded at your ability to describe things in such manners. Beautiful work.