Hay this is an excellent poem great expression keep the work up

Very interesting good job keep it up

Thank u 4 commenting my i really love this poem i cnt get enough of it lol 10/10 love always
Talisha xXx

This was an awsome poem, true words

Wow its amazing i love it

Wow. Very powerful piece. *5/5

Wow this has strong emotions and a wonderful flow! very very well written!!! im starting to like all of your work....hmmm you'll become a part of my favorites collection!! lol _Mya_ =]]

AMAZING! I just loved it! You are so good! This poem was great and very well writen! Keep up the amazing work!
buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Hi, thanx for the comment on my poem! i loved this piece of work, excellent! 5/5

So sad but amazing! Great job!
xoxo

Very wonderfully wrtten and sort of long, but hey, thats lfe. anyway, your an awesome poet keep up the good work, chica!
~OnTheRunFromLove~

WOW UR A GR2AT WRIT3R ALSO IT WAS KINDA LONG BUT THIS PO3M N33D3D TO HAVE ALL THAT EXTRA LENGHT TO MAKE IT B3TT3R WHITCH U DID SO GR3AT JOB UR V3RY TAL3NT3D!

~~~~~~~~VICTORIA~~~~~~~~

This is a great poem u have much talent!!!! this is so sick, twistd and haunting, that is why i love it, it kind of has a true message in it, well done

Oh, gosh. That's sick. Uhm, in both uses of the word. Amazing. Crazy imagery. I love it.
--Parker

Ouch. this was... different. i liked it but yes it is very disturbing. but this was well written still.

5/5 always David

Wow that was a little creepy I'm going to have nightmares now but.....good anyway ^_^

I had to look at this because of the 'may disturb'.

Wow. OwO I love it. All of it. 8DDDDD It's all psychotic, yaayyy. >w>

Haha, yeah, problem is he's always hiding his emotions but as Graf's character said 'You know you can't hide anything from me when you have eys like a mood ring'. He's also got a nasty limp. He was adopted but his ne wfather hated him for his wings, but he broke his knee by accident. His step-sister told him to get it cast but he insisted he wasn't hurt and it healed badly. >>

Dang! this is an awesome poem..Man i feel sorry for the guy that used love the wrong way to you. Wow...Awesome job
-vino

1st : impression .. "creepy"
2nd impression .. "there is somthing there"
3rd impression .. " Imotional"
ending " cannot be better"
i feel sorry for myself when i write poetry then see your poetry .. the deffirence is like the sky and the ground .. i have a requist though i am in no position to ask ..
since you are a great poet .. if you have the time .. give me honest comment on my poems ..
-Rashid ..