I think you should change the last line to >> why you didnt care
nice poem tho i like it 4/5

I like it, its how ma boyfriend feels about his ex
thanks for shareing =]

It's short but I still liked it...
Nice job...

I think i felt this when i was with my first love all he would do is give me lies and yet i loved him with my whole heart no joke he was my everything and now that i think about it this poem goes with me lol he did hurt me and he did go out with my younger sister...
Lady Ashes