Comments : The Life of a Valentine

  • 10 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I signed it in the middle
    "your secret love" is what it said
    And added just a bit of glitter
    To the heart painted rosy red.

    ^^ THat is sooooo me! I am so creative and I do that all the time except I don't have a boy that I like right now but I make Valentines for my friends all the time ...this was so cute it is just childish fun and I love it!!!
    Excellent write and great rhymes!
    Chelsey

  • 10 years ago

    by CondescendingHeart

    Awe... that was adorable :_)
    I loved it... especially this part;

    Our eyes met as we stood up
    Each holding half a heart
    A smile of recognition
    For a love that wouldn't part.

    Great job... keep that em coming :_)

  • 10 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    WOW, SO DAMN CUTE! MY EYES ALMOST WATERED! I LOVE IT! 5/5!

  • 10 years ago

    by Tess Tjasink

    That was sooo beautiful!! i honestly loved that! it flows so nicely and it is soo adorable!! loved it! kepp up the awesome poems!
    xox tess

  • 10 years ago

    by Never URs

    This is really creative good job!! keep it up!

  • That is one of the sweetest things I've ever read.

  • 10 years ago

    by Never URs

    Your poems are really good! they're really heartfelt and you have alot of talent, will you please comment on mine?

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Cute and sweet. I also thought he'd thrown the valentine away. Nice twist!

  • 10 years ago

    by jordan french

    That is really really good. i love it :D
    your one talented poet XD

  • 10 years ago

    by Sweet Toxicin

    This was amazing.The love you put into this surprise me.I lvoe it all.Great job,mon amour.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a beautiful poem. Takes me back in time to grade school.Excellent job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Kyra

    Hey great use of words. The flow was very persistant and all went together well. 5/5.
    ~Kyra~

  • 10 years ago

    by Dayne Yelle

    This is....really really good. i love it, really, its so cute! Great Job, you have a knack for writing :)