Comments : I Will Give You Independence Forever

  • 11 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Wow David that was really good i liked alot... 5/5 always

  • 11 years ago

    by Denysia

    Aww sweet! great job 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Marjan

    Doing something with good intentions leads to good endings.
    thanks for sharing this!

  • 11 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Nice work this sounds great and my brother loved it said it was true

  • 11 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was portrayed very well i liked this because it was so true. nicely written poem you have here david. Well done ~mel

  • 11 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    That to me was your al time best David, I have an uncle in Iraq, so it touched my heart. Thank you!

    your servent also,

  • 11 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Spread throughtou the world America\'s light

    i sallute you

    Anyhow, as I've said before : You write such poetry in a way that makes others want to read even if they do not think of these topics often . Your words are simple; your poetry short -- but your pieces hold such hope that fill people with warmth . Especially those connected somehow the Iraq war .

    The ending was superb, and beautifully chosen .
    Another great one from you (: