This is really funny. I liked how you used the personifications in your poem. Keep it up.

Stay Playa,
SC

+.+ Hahah, I thought it was really funny. :) +.+

Yeah, parts are funny some are sad. The mirror part was funny though. That stuck out to me. Good job to both of you!
Charisma*

I like the bit bout the mirror and the dishwasher. i like how this is funny and sad at the same time, i liked the bit bout the bed and the pillows but that bit was sad. could u comment my poem 'don't make my mistakes' or any of my otha 1s if ya have the time. tnx n once again lubs da poem.

I luv how you used the furniture it made it so interesting :)
5/5

Lol i loved that haha its rather funny, im not even gunna ask what made you think of that but was good =]
5/5 =]
~*~Jen~*~

I liked the humor in it. this was such a cute poem! 5/5

This is really creative good job!! keep it up!

Gem,
You and Marcus did a wonderful job on this poem. I laughed and needed it. I love your discrption you used to discribe the way the home was going through the sadness. Wondrful job!

That is hilarious[sp?] I just loved how you and your fiance wrote this! 5/5

This is unique. It is also interesting that you have incorporated opposite extremes in this one - sadness and humor. Cute collaboration!

Hey awesome job! i really liked it!! keep it up!!

I really like this, very creative, and very fresh. I can definately relate, thanks for sharing

This poem is funny I think it is neat that u co wrote this with yoour man.

+.+ I haven't even thought of what I'm going to do, when I continue it. Any ideas? +.+

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Kind hard to read it wit kelly clarkson's song in my head lol but wow great job.

lissa

"And the drawers aren't as open with me anymore"

I almost NEVER vote on a poem unless I genuinely enjoy it to the point of being moved in some significant way. And I've had a crap week, have just got in, and read this as the evening's 3rd poem. And it not only made me smile, it made me laugh out loud with quite the most poignant line I've read for a while.

Kudos to you both. :-)

Hey thanks for the comment. after reading ur dirty deeds i decided to post confessions. i dnt think any of my frnds have yet realised wot it is just yet... i hope they dnt believe it.

i like this poem... very well written by the both of you lol much love .xx

Comment #1:
I have mixed emotions on this one cause I totally love it, don't get me wrong. But I'm not sure if I should laugh b/c your talking about inanimate objects feeling pain...or if I should cry b/c you're feeling all the things you're talking about since he's been gone. But you did an exellent job, keep it up! :) You an Marcus should callaborate more! Heeehee!
~Midnight Sun