Comments : Good advice?

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem is so true, we conform to what we see and I'm not gunna lie all the advertisements and stuff on TV work, amazing write 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Whats wrong with this advice? these are
    all the things i was told. you forgot
    always play in traffic. lol cy

    jen if ur not to busy i could really
    use ur help with this girl who i've been talking through poems. she needs help and im losing her. her names haily and go to her latest
    poems go back about 10 and
    you can see hows she wants to stop but always fails i think one of her poems is called i'ld gotta quit or I did it again. let me know if you can't find
    her
    cy