Wow! i'm in love with this poem...it caught me in the first stanza! the flow is great and it's just an amazing poem 5/5 keep it up
x!x

Omg i cant believe you wrote something so amazing! (not saying ure incapable) it just sounds like something from a posh place from a poet that gets paid to write.
i love it random person.
please write more
xxxxxxx