Hah, nicely done. Good flow and all that... jazz.

Excellent job on your poem. The message you portray in this write is wonderful. 5/5 Take care Cindy

WOW thiis is a reele well dun poem keep doin wut u do :)

Ya know whats ironic about this poem?
"Nothing will bring me down" written by Shattered Heart.

One word !! it soo amazing

It wasn't an insult.
I just thought it was funny when I was looking at it.
This is very well versed.

Good job ... i like it especially the last
verse :)