Creepy yet wonderful. brava!
a trillion/5

This is really good.. It's very dark and interesting..:)
I especially like this part,

Haunting melody
The cries of the damned
Fill long forgotten corners of hearts

The mystery of this poem really intrigues the reader.

The lack of rhyming does cut into the flow a bit, but the word choice and rhythm more than make up for it.

nice work! 5/5

Very dark and vivid. You caught me right in the first stanza. Wonderful job

Well i had to read it all again, this was a very thoughtful poem and a lot of meaning and description was in it.

keep writing and for this i give you another 5! David

I leave another comment you lucky duck who gets so many!!!!!! MMM...(this is so irrelevent) I CAN'T WAIT FOR HANNAH'S CAKE!!!!!!!

Oh yes and apparently this is one of your more popular poems...love the ratings!

Well your ending statement made that poem lighten the mood up a whole lot xDD It sounds like a discussion we would have lol

Maybe that poem didn't make a lot of sense in a conventional sense but never the less i found it hauntingly beautiful.i liked how the poem stanzas were relatively short and changed. like the brief reflections off the facets of a jewel. each one different and at myriad angles. yet still part of the same jewel

This poem was amazing!!
i loved every part
but my favorite was

Haunting melody
The cries of the damned
Fill long forgotten corners of hearts

Great job!
5/5
--Jess

I like the 'unmarked grave' image. I haven't a clue why. This is eerily haunting. o3o

I tend to obsess over using precisely the right word for what I want.. Ot has to sound right, feel right, and conjure the right image. I can make a pradaox just by using a synonym over a common word, sometimes.

It's... Me trying to remember Shruikan. But I got it confuzzled with 'Galabtroix'... I liked the result ocne I realised it was wrong. XD