That was amazing. This poem was down right mindblowing. My lord it was good. The ending was soooo amazing. You took something so heartfelt and transferred the feelings directly into words. That poem deserves to be framed and placed on the mantle. Absolutley great job. I was hooked the whole way through.

Wow! Im in awe! That is so gorgeous and sad. I can tell there was a lot of pain and emotion in it. I especially like those last two lines, those really engraved this into my mind. An endless garden of roses, such powerful meaning! Great Write!

P.S. Happy Birthday Ash!

"Because you may have been pricked my a thorn my friend" Did you mean "By a thorn"?

The poem was great though! It was so pained and full of anger. All the pain and the different things that caused the pain...it just kept flowing. I loved how it never repeated anything. It was excellent, each thing was a completely new idea! I love the endless garden of roses...it sounds so sweet. Excellent job!

~Morgan~