Comments : Brown Paper Sack

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Wowwww ur a dreamer i should have
    guest it by ur poems. keep writting
    i think ur big pay day will be sooner than u think

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamica

    Very good story telling. I liked your poem alot. I got goosebumps.

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    What's your new poem called
    something wrong with the site latest poems don't come up on our pages

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    This was touching and beautiful full of hope. This depicts what so many have gone through, I'm sorry if by chance it has happened to you.
    Connie