Comments : Vampyre

  • 10 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    It's so short but you really managed to paint a turely wonderfull picture! I really REALLY loved it! I'm being serious, it's really good! Excellent job....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I liked this, thought i have to say i prefered the first poem it read. I liked the fact that this one is so short, yet i really liked the fact that every staza started with "I love the..." which the rest of the stanza goes on to explain why. I thought you could improve by your punctuation, yet i still really enjoyed this! An excellent read! Keep them up! xx

  • 10 years ago

    by robin milford

    Very unique read I enjoyed this.

  • 10 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    You really managed to paint a turely wonderfull picture! im not intothe vampire thing but your poems about it are great keep up the good work

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    OOh.. I liked this one. The imagery was awesome. You could fix the structure a bit, and vampire isn't spelled right. I added you to my favorites.

  • 10 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    I liked this, thought i have to say i prefered the first poem it read. the imagery is great and all but im not so big on all the dark stuff, great poem tho my feelings aside

  • 10 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    And again your use of words is fantastic! i love how you pen them! great work again hun!

    xoxo Lucy

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    This poem is short but still very powerful. It isn't original but imagery is great and it is easy to read. It is very interesting but it could be even more better. It still deserves 5/5