Ok mom even though what you said
is good stuff and i love everything
you write this seens like preaching or
a long quote i hope your skin is thick
enough for this cause i only like the best of you.
cy

5/5 on the vote

Ahhhhhhh i feel soi bad . i new i can
be honest ifeel so bad i take it back
i take it back mom lol
cy

Improvements not excuses love it
and i'll try to live by it

The world does not revolve around
you my wife saids this everytime
we fight thats why i did'nt like it
at first now its my favorite lol

I love this poem too lol. Every thing in this is so truthful. It's kind of inspiring I guess. And your now added to my favorites. :] 5/5

marcella

Make improvements, not excuses

that was my fave line, its the best advice ive heard in a long time!! well done

much love and many kisses,
bex