Comments : Perfect, not perfect

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    There is a typo at the bottom line.
    this poem was good. evying some one like that isnt worth is though. there life probably is screwed up too. you just don't know for sure.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved the last two lines of this, I thought they really stood out.
    Good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    I like this poem i got one like it not on here yet though i like your style and the many things you write about keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by somehow broken

    I like this poem. but i agree with "¤Kitty¤" that no one is worth that. someone once told me that they wanted to be just like me and they thought i was perfect. i'm not i have my own problems and everyone has them. Nobody is perfect!
    anyway i loved the poem. and i liked the free flow of it. well done =) keep writing!
    p.s. thanks heaps for the comment on my poem

  • 17 years ago

    by x WatCh The Tears FaLl x

    I liked this poem alot but the more u envy some1 the more u become uscked into what they want u 2 b

  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    The last line their is spelled wrong. Anyways I liked this, but like the ones up there said its not worth it. And nobodys perfect everyone has there own share of pain, and sometimes the popular ones are the ones that have it. The flow and rhythm were good too. Keep it up!