Comments : The beeping

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    This is a poem for those who are not morning people. enjoy!

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Superb writting. I give it two thumbs up

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    I like it! the view, the words, the mall. there's nothing i like more than bumming around the mall like a mallrat, but all i wanted to say is good poem

    your servant:
    david

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Wide screen plasma T.V. haha thats funny. gotta love it. i did enjoy it was a unique poem. lol ttyl
    5/5 always
    Kate~

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    stupid alarm... happens every time it starts getting good.
    5/5
    Kate~

  • 15 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    I forgot all about this poem, i just read it again Kayls and I had a good laugh.... its a good one!!!! but I'm a morning person..sometimes. well tux or not u always look like big bucks lol.. nice write, very funny..
    5/5 always
    Ur LSB~Kate