I wrote this after i'd had the song 'i want candy' stuck in my head all day. eventually i started saying zombie instead of candy. here's the result!

Beav - you are so funny. I love this poem. Take care :)

Me too i love zombies. my favorite movie is night of the living dead.
i think that we are all like sleep
walking zombies. going throught
the motions of our lives like working
etc etc etc. talk about the biggest zombie you should see me after a 8 ball of coke, brains brains thats me
lol cy

You might want to have put wat the word ulogy means for the public. some might not know the real meaning.

this poem was very funny and exciting to read. i love it! i love zombies too.

5/5 David

Good poem, not your best. It was repetitive in words and content. Keep it up

Interesting... the strucuture was good here ... the words were simple but still you got your point across of how much you love zonbies.. lol.. i love how you say zombies need love too .. clever ... great job!

Haha, i loved this! I love your writing style, it's so unique. This poem is a little morbid and I think that's why I enjoyed it that much! great job! 5/5

Lol zombies need love too!!! haha i absolutely love this. it rocked

much love and many kisses,
bex

I love the action, just work on the vocab a bit. 4/5. Good work!