How can I ever hope to find
A love that's strong and true
When In my heart I must confess
To always loving you.
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Jeannie this stanza just makes my heart weep. When you hear someone say "it hits you in the heart" I know exactly the feeling.

I need tissue and lots of it. The flow is perfection and the emotions felt with such impact.

Take care, my dear friend
Luanne

Great job on this write. The flow was great. Take care Cindy

5

Amazing work! i love it, very emotional and pure. i can relate. it brought tears to my eyes. very strong and emotion-filled. your a great writer. keep it up =).

-Jessyka-

This was a battle I had to fight...but haven't we all? A good poem, perhaps only because of its connection with my own personal experiences, but who am I to know?

I absolutely love this one. My boyfriend and I just split up 3 days ago and this poem really touched me. It gets a 5!!!!