Comments : For i'm one with the horse

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Pretty. but i would structurer the last stanza a little better.

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Structure. whoops. i can't type too well.

    other than sounding somewhat negative--i like how you worded this poem, the image was nice. very calm. the place was beautiful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked it very spiratual nice one!

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Well this is a very nice poem, makes me happy. thank you very much for sharing this with everyone.

    5/5 david

  • 10 years ago

    by Afraid of the Dark

    This poem definately transmits your emotions
    Good job

    laura
    x

  • 10 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Well you do show great emotion and this piece is a good one you should writwe more like this one i like most of your poems that i have read but this is diff and good.

  • 10 years ago

    by amelia

    5/5

    excellent work
    i love the last line with the invisible footprints...sounds different...
    sounds nice
    love
    amy

  • 10 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow very good poem. i really like the subject of it! it's different, so that's good! it's very well written! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 10 years ago

    by Rahl The Layman Lord

    Interesting poem...not sure if you are truly writing about a horse but i am assuming so...there really is something about such a noble animal isn't there
    thanks for the comment btw

    -Jason-

  • 10 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Hmmm. I don't have a horse, but I lease one. And I'd do anything in the world just to be with her. In this poem, I didn't quite see that passion. I mean it's probably there, just me as a reader can't see it.

    Although I didn't see passion, the format was nicee. The flow wasn't bad. But the thing that really caught my eye was the beautiful words that described your feeling. A lot of people can't do that. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha