Hmmm. I don't have a horse, but I lease one. And I'd do anything in the world just to be with her. In this poem, I didn't quite see that passion. I mean it's probably there, just me as a reader can't see it.
Although I didn't see passion, the format was nicee. The flow wasn't bad. But the thing that really caught my eye was the beautiful words that described your feeling. A lot of people can't do that. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo