Pretty. but i would structurer the last stanza a little better.

Structure. whoops. i can't type too well.

other than sounding somewhat negative--i like how you worded this poem, the image was nice. very calm. the place was beautiful.

I liked it very spiratual nice one!

Well this is a very nice poem, makes me happy. thank you very much for sharing this with everyone.

5/5 david

This poem definately transmits your emotions
Good job

laura
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Well you do show great emotion and this piece is a good one you should writwe more like this one i like most of your poems that i have read but this is diff and good.

5/5

excellent work
i love the last line with the invisible footprints...sounds different...
sounds nice
love
amy

Wow very good poem. i really like the subject of it! it's different, so that's good! it's very well written! 5/5

~Kristina

Interesting poem...not sure if you are truly writing about a horse but i am assuming so...there really is something about such a noble animal isn't there
thanks for the comment btw

-Jason-

Hmmm. I don't have a horse, but I lease one. And I'd do anything in the world just to be with her. In this poem, I didn't quite see that passion. I mean it's probably there, just me as a reader can't see it.

Although I didn't see passion, the format was nicee. The flow wasn't bad. But the thing that really caught my eye was the beautiful words that described your feeling. A lot of people can't do that. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha