Comments : As Spring Comes From the Winter

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is so beautiful. I really love the word choices in this poem. Great Job! Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Alvaro

    The way u wrote the poem is really amazing it was a graet poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    All around are breaths of wonder
    Winter's coat is left behind
    Caught up in all the splendor
    As Spring sings her lullaby
    ^^^
    Oh Mercy Jeannie you create such beautiful imagery with words.
    It's as though you have taken a plain white canvas and magically created a rainbow of beauty and color.
    It leaves me breathless and soooo looking forward to Springtime.

    Beautiful, beautiful poem Jeannie!

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Absolutely amazing! What a beautiful array of spring. The imagery was astounding and the flow was effortless.
    Wonderful Job.
    Dixie

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hey this poem was really sweet...the imagery in the 3rd and 4th stanza was really easily pictured, thanks to your beautiful choice of words. congrats.
    nuff luv xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Genna

    Yet again a breath taking piece!